Bathing (In You) challenge 11-i

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Open Poetry #27

Bathing (In You) challenge 11-i

nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-07-31 05:22 PM

Bathing (In You) ...Acrostic

M aybe it's the sad of me becoming a bit unglued
E nter then the words to spite, digesting state, confused
E xacted from the payments of, emotions somewhat raw
T ender me this fragileness, these wordings in my scrawl

M aybe, perhaps this sometimes will of words in need to say
E xpresses more than sees the eye between these lines this day.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-31-2003 05:23 PM).]

serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-07-31 05:28 PM

Nicely done, Maureen. This one remains true to a bit of the history of Acrostics, which was widely used in writings for Valentine's Day in the 1800's.

I could see this as an old-fashioned card with bits of lace and satin.

Actually, I can see YOU that way too. Genteel...

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-07-31 05:33 PM

you sure are quick

Thanks, Karen...I really wasn't feeling like poetry today, but thought your challenge would brighten my mood...and it did

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-07-31 05:36 PM

Maureen, you more than met this challenge!
Well done..and I love the acrostic message.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-07-31 05:42 PM

well Nancy, truth be told, I usually have a message somewhere in my poetry anyway...

thanks
M

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5 posted 2003-07-31 08:40 PM

I've noticed that!!!

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-07-31 08:42 PM

hmmmm..methinks I can't keep much from you at all...

hugss
M

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