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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Shhh … ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~  There is a shush to the nightThat bids me slip from slumbered keep To walk the nectar of the indigo woods Aglow with moonlight’s vanilla rays Softly fallen on dew-dripped leaves Inhaled … Inhaled Shhh … There is a shush to the night ~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, I'm whispering my reply so as to not disturb the stillness and beauty of your night... Lovely, dear Goddess of Moonlight. EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You hear the music of the night and pen it beautifully! Shhh .... the hush speaking of beauty. Love, Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and a flavor to the night, which you touch with your lovely words |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This makes me want to get up at night & see if I can find the same beauty. Your words are beautiful. Love ya, Betty |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You so often accompany your poetry with a picture, your picture with a poem..... ...but you don't need pictures to show this, not at all...beautiful. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this quiet beauty, dear friend... very much. *S* |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: What a special quality this has. There is such magic in the night woods! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh, so soothing to this tired soul today. I shall shush...I wish my kids would too! LOL Marge Tindal, you are awesome! Patricia |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Marge...When I read this it reminded me of Longfellows "Day is done" The silence in the shhh! is soft, like the eagle feather wafting down... * "THE day is done, and the darkness Falls from the wings of Night, As a feather is wafted downward From an eagle in his flight." * very nice, images, metaphors , story line.....ice |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I believe I'm speechless..... Wonderful! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Marge: God do I know this . . . This is beautiful At one with the night indeed and your graphics are amazing! xxoo |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis..thankyou for the quiet beauty of this. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Simply beautiful, my friend...classic 'Marge' poetry. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I thank each of you for the read ... and the generous replies~ Ed~ Thank you soooooo much~ Ice~ Such a lovely, lovely compliment~ Thank you~ *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I walk that hush every night~ lovely Marge hugss M |
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