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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-06-21 10:08 AM



Shhh …
~*Marge Tindal*~

~There is a shush to the night
That bids me slip from slumbered keep
To walk the nectar of the indigo woods
Aglow with moonlight’s vanilla rays
Softly fallen on dew-dripped leaves
Inhaled … Inhaled
Shhh …
There is a shush to the night~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2003-06-21 10:17 AM


Marge, I'm whispering my reply so as to not disturb the stillness and beauty of your night...

Lovely, dear Goddess of Moonlight.

EA

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2 posted 2003-06-21 10:19 AM


You hear the music of the night and pen it beautifully! Shhh .... the hush speaking of beauty.
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2003-06-21 10:34 AM


and a flavor to the night, which you touch with your lovely words
Betty
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4 posted 2003-06-21 11:01 AM


This makes me want to get up at  night & see if I can find the same beauty. Your words are beautiful.
             Love ya,
                  Betty

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5 posted 2003-06-21 11:05 AM


You so often accompany your poetry with a picture, your picture with a poem.....

...but you don't need pictures to show this, not at all...beautiful.

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6 posted 2003-06-21 03:16 PM


I like this quiet beauty, dear friend... very much. *S*
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7 posted 2003-06-21 03:31 PM


Dear Marge:  What a special quality this has. There is such magic in the night woods!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2003-06-21 09:00 PM


Oh, so soothing to this tired soul today.  I shall shush...I wish my kids would too!  LOL

Marge Tindal, you are awesome!

Patricia

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9 posted 2003-06-21 10:15 PM


Marge...When I read this it reminded me of Longfellows "Day is done" The silence in the shhh! is soft, like the eagle feather wafting down...
*
"THE day is done, and the darkness
Falls from the wings of Night,
As a feather is wafted downward
From an eagle in his flight."
*
very nice, images, metaphors , story line.....ice


Albert J. Allie
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10 posted 2003-06-21 10:26 PM


I believe I'm speechless.....
Wonderful!


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11 posted 2003-06-21 10:54 PM


Marge:

God do I know this . . .
This is beautiful
At one with the night
indeed
and your graphics
are amazing!
xxoo

Martie
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12 posted 2003-06-21 11:00 PM


Marge/sis..thankyou for the quiet beauty of this.
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13 posted 2003-06-21 11:03 PM



Simply beautiful, my friend...classic 'Marge' poetry.
Hugs,
~Vicky

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you have not truly met the poet.
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14 posted 2003-06-22 05:05 AM


wow
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2003-07-31 10:11 AM


I thank each of you for the read ... and the generous replies~

Ed~
Thank you soooooo much~

Ice~
Such a lovely, lovely compliment~
Thank you~
*Huglets* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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16 posted 2003-07-31 08:34 PM


I walk that hush every night~

lovely Marge
hugss
M

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