Open Poetry #27 |
to live in dreams |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
won’t you like to breathe in scents of ancient woods where young shrubs share space with strong tall oaks of old while droplets shine bright on lanes of petals green won’t you like to live in such an immense dream I know for sure that I like to live in dreams for romantic I am with no need of guise and nature holds for me dreams that outlive dreams a zeal that outlasts zeal life that’s beyond life won’t you like to swim in rivers with gentle waves where foams marry selves to wayside cracks of rocks while light feathers float at ease with wind and sky won’t you like to live in such a boundless dream I know for sure that I love to live in dreams and nature holds for me streams of endless dreams |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For romantic, you surely are. This is lovely. Let's get to that duet, any time you are ready... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, Sudhir, you truly are a romantic, and this is such a bewitching invitation to dream....loved it! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir, as always bringing me peace with your words . . . This reminds me of Rivendell Beautiful execution xxoo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
being romantic is good *sigh* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
This poem is amazing.. very romantic and it made me feel as if I was dreaming |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes! Yes! YES!!! Loved this! Dream on! Write on! Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Sudhir...Jsmes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sudhir Iyer - your words touch me once again. To dream is just delightful and fulfilling... BC |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ah yes: location, location, location... How much for time-share there? I'm in... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and this is a beautiful dream, O Romantic One Maree fate is not just |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, my dear friends... dream on... regards sudhir |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I would certainly like to live in a boundless dream like this. Great poem, Sudhir. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (08-01-2003 11:25 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks, my dear friends... regards sudhir |
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