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Ruby Heart Pendant (Challenge Response, 7-d)
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Ruby Heart Pendant (Challenge Response, 7-d) |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Challenge- 7-d...Ruby, Triolet This is my first triolet...and it almost killed me! Thanks Sunshine for your help...I need a nap now! LOL Ruby Heart Pendant Ruby heart pendant held by golden clasp For she could not bear to let loose its hold Though his heart remained outside of her grasp Ruby heart pendant held by golden clasp Released no sigh of hope in beauty’s gasp Thus her heart’s story shall never be told Ruby heart pendant held by golden clasp For she could not bear to let loose its hold |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Brava! Brava! Another one, please. And snap! to it! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Patricia - I adore the triolet and your form is perfect! xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...beautiful!!!!  You did it!..and very very well I might add.  ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Lovely poem, Patricia. You did a good job with your first triolet. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patricia~ This is just lovely~ Greatly enjoyed the softness of thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
After this gold medal triolet victory, I trust you need to rest up for quite some time!  Wonderful! Isn't it rewarding when you stretch those poetic wings and fly to new heights!  Linda |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
HEY! these triolet's are getting to me, I'm loving them and Patricia thank you for this precious gem of a triolet. one day perhaps I shall give it a go. Will you teach me? enjoyed. Maree  p.s keepng this. fate is not just |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love the implications here! "Ruby heart pendant held by golden clasp" suggests a certain passion held in chains--and even golden chains are indeed, chains. smile. I just keep reading and I'm delighted. You did a great job with this Patricia, and the Triolet is indeed one of my favorites to read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a beautiful ruby red poem...with heart  M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - very nice for your first trioletty.... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ruby heart pendant held by golden clasp For she could not bear to let loose its hold Though his heart remained outside of her grasp ============================== Love the word play and phrasing in this. Wonderful offering to the challenge. Very lovely poetess Patricia. "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
And the golden trophy goes to you.You did an amazing job and met the challenge head on. angelblueyes |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
"Ruby heart pendant held by golden clasp Released no sigh of hope in beauty’s gasp Thus her heart’s story shall never be told" __________________ great writing here. Mike |
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