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The last breath
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The last breath |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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The last breath Let love be the whisper in the wind that rides within touch of my lips as I breathe your name one last time before my eyes shut and angels take me up from this body of old that can no longer hold my lost soul [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (07-30-2003 03:44 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thomas~ This thought is exquisite~ 'Let love be the whisper in the wind that rides within' Lovely, lovely, lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I can hear you breathe, enchanting write here. Enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...sigh |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Thomas... I love these lines... "that can no longer hold my lost soul" Like Marge said... exquisite... I can't think of a better word! "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Thomas . . . this is breathtaking xxoo |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank you I honored by your words to my poem |
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