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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-07-16 12:16 PM

Shaken, Not Stirred

spill me out
into the glass
a tease of lips
then gently sip
the sweet of me
and taste my kiss
in soft caress
upon your tongue...

intoxicated, drink me in
love, quench your thirst in me

~vlraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-16-2003 04:48 AM).]

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-07-16 12:22 PM

Wonderful write

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

2 posted 2003-07-16 12:33 PM

I like it. Maybe it's just because my head hurts, but I really do like it.

Yah, I've caught the bug again.

Send me a Get Well Soon card?

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2003-07-16 01:10 AM

well
this appears

stirring

to me

love THAT liquor

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-07-16 01:33 AM

smoooother than a vintage wine

nicely done, Vicky!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-16 01:45 AM

very sensual...enjoyed

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2003-07-16 02:59 AM

I love it; it's so cool that you're writing again

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

7 posted 2003-07-16 05:11 AM

Made my tongue water and my mind create,
imitate a night of passion in fluxuate.

yea...whatever that meant. So uh...it was good basically.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

8 posted 2003-07-16 05:29 AM

very nice write n read...

enjoyed...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2003-07-16 09:25 AM

Oh boy that is some martini Vicky! Whew!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2003-07-16 09:31 AM

The title caught my eye and I was not disappointed..

Susan C.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-07-16 09:32 AM

Vicky, sounds like you do want a kiss!!! LOL
I enjoyed reading.

Hugs

Ethel

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2003-07-16 09:32 AM

Bartender, hit me again...

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2003-07-16 09:33 AM

vlraynes
WOW and I don't say that too often. LOL

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

14 posted 2003-07-16 09:48 AM

Vicky~~~ Like Seymour said WOW
I need to go turn down the a/c LOL.
Enjoyed very much, Smooth flow...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

15 posted 2003-07-16 10:47 AM

Oh...my.

Yesterday I read
harsh...

today, I'm given a fine liqueur.

I'm appreciative of all of the many
facets of you.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

16 posted 2003-07-16 07:43 PM

yummy...liked very much...h

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

17 posted 2003-07-16 10:18 PM

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

18 posted 2003-07-16 11:42 PM

Hm... This gives one some real incentive to imbibe, ya know??...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

19 posted 2003-07-17 04:43 AM

Wow...you guys are awesome!  In fact..I appreciate
you all so much, that I'm typing this reply a second
time now, because it didn't post the first time,
and I lost the whole thing!  LOL

Tima...thanks so much.

Kielo...get well soon! *grin*  Glad you enjoyed this.

Brian...smiling at your reply...thank you.

Kacy...thank you so much...really glad you enjoyed.

Dixie...thank you, friend.

Rhonda...you're such a good kid. *grin*...thank you.

JaiOfHeaven...thanks so much for the kind words.
Glad you enjoyed this one.

QjQ...thank you, friend.

Sharon..LOL..thank you, lady.  Glad you like.

Susan...thank you much...glad you weren't disappointed.

Ethel...what gives you that idea? LOL *grin*
Thanks much, my friend...glad you enjoyed.

scorpio...*smile*...thank you.

Sy...WOW @ your 'WOW'..LOL.
You flatter me...thank you.

Paul...LOL @ the A/C.  What can I say?...
it's this Phoenix heat.
Thank you much, my friend.

Soleil Noir...thank you...*smile*...and I appreciate YOU.

Helen...thank you much, lady.

QjQ...*smile*

Nan...ya think? *grin*  Thank ya, friend.

Thanks again, everyone.  You guys are great,
and I love you to pieces!
Love and hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

20 posted 2003-07-17 09:41 AM

enjoyed

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

21 posted 2003-07-31 10:57 PM

WOO-YEAH! now thats what i call *goooood stuff!*

i like it, i like it!!

hugs, g

I want to run naked in the Blue!

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

22 posted 2003-08-01 12:04 PM

This is as smooth as a sweet wine tantalizing the palate of your mouth.I enjoyed this.

angelblueyes

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

23 posted 2003-08-01 12:15 PM

Words to that one that just does it for ya!! Lights that fire within, sweet.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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