Open Poetry #27 |
Scream |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Scream I have to start facing my fears stepping forward to take a risk this silence is a void I can no longer take I would rather scream "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Then scream, scream at the top of your lungs, and kick silence back in the bucket. great write, as always I enjoy yours |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ty i love your work too...h |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this hurts Go On and Scream! I'm listening... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
You got my attention with the title, and as I read I realized how many times I wanted to scream, but was afraid I'd bother somebody!! But really, if you want to scream, let 'er rip...I'll hear you all the way over here!! Loved it..~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Can surely relate here but you said it better then I ever could. You are an amazing writer. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I've never been able to scream but it must be a release. Enjoyed your poem. Maggie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ok move ahead . . . love this one indeed xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and I do....scream sometimes...it is so hard to feel good and confident lately. hugss M |
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