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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-31 03:25 AM


Scream

I have to start
facing my fears
stepping forward
to take a risk
this silence
is a void
I can
no longer take
I would
rather scream


"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-07-31 03:28 AM


Then scream,
scream at the top of your lungs,
and kick silence back in the bucket.

great write, as always I enjoy yours

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-07-31 03:29 AM


ty i love your work too...h
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-07-31 04:14 AM


this hurts Go On and Scream! I'm listening...
Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2003-07-31 05:55 AM


You got my attention with the title, and as I read I realized how many times I wanted to scream, but was afraid I'd bother somebody!! But really, if you want to scream, let 'er rip...I'll hear you all the way over here!! Loved it..~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Saunni
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5 posted 2003-07-31 07:54 AM


Can surely relate here but you said it better then I ever could. You are an amazing writer.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

cusick
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6 posted 2003-07-31 09:00 AM


I've never been able to scream but it must be a release. Enjoyed your poem. Maggie
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-07-31 10:44 AM


AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ok move ahead . . .
love this one indeed
xxoo

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2003-07-31 10:48 AM


and I do....scream sometimes...it is so hard
to feel good and confident lately.

hugss
M

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