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B3jamboree
Junior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 33
Michigan

0 posted 2003-07-30 11:30 AM

Soft looks, even softer ways

Breathe soft as a pedal, voice a spring sprinkle
Not a wrinkle on your perfumed body, or clothes
Blinding sunlight from your eyes woke me in your bed
In the morning on the seventh day when you rose

Why do you run your soft hands through my dirty hair?
Aren't I an ape with hair all on my arms and chest?
Was it Freud who reffered to beauty and the beast?
And sexual tension straight from the mothers breast?

You move like calm lake breaking moonlight on the shore
Holy there before me so calm and collected
I fall at your feet in love and admiration
It's you that glows pale, not the moonlight reflected

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-07-30 11:38 AM

I'm sure it's been said before, but here's another Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this poem very much, and it's masculine feel...very nice, indeed...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-07-30 03:44 PM

Like this...James

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-07-30 03:47 PM

Hey Chris!!

Welcome to passions!!

I enjoyed this piece very much.

Susan C.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-07-30 10:50 PM

Welcome to Passions...
I noted some imagery very familiar in your write...and enjoyed very much the echo in my heart.
ThisDiamond

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-07-30 10:55 PM

Welcome to Passions.Loved the imagery and a great write.
angelblueyes

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-07-30 10:58 PM

Oh my...how beautiful!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-07-31 02:13 AM

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