Open Poetry #27 |
Celebrity |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
To my actor friends: Fortune rests in chimerical packs polished car hoods and china stacks tea time's arranged through a mad hatter agent famous by deranged calls to punctual pageants Cued act microphone invites a speaker back of megaphone hides the peeker celebrity status is on the rise let morning bird chitter arise Celebrities exhibit there ware for tear stand up to the test of public scrutiny so did pirate crews on hoisted sail mutinies centuries before American idol worshipers cared... So what do I say of the celebrity out there? about pretty faces when their lives are laid bare? about handsome traces when evolved to has beens.. as famous words step into devolved worlds we're in? it's okay to be a "star" if it doesn't go to your head it's okay to fly "afar" when you'd rather be home instead . [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-29-2003 09:38 PM).] |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
that was cute, i really liked it. You put your words together very well, keep up the good work, and keep writing lol b/c i love reading your stuff! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The celebrity lives in spotlight for sure...and I don't think I could ever tolerate the burn. You have an interesting mind dear poet...very clever, and quite astounding. TD |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write n read,,, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Diamond Many do it just to be in the spotlight, then of course I think the pressure leads to a lot of "life in the fast lane sequences" we read about... jaysh thanks for reading [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-31-2003 01:51 AM).] |
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