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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2003-07-30 08:58 AM



Reflections of souls
unseen over your shoulder
watching over you

© Copyright 2003 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-07-30 09:02 AM


Paula,
Then I better be careful what I do. LOL

Paula Finn
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2 posted 2003-07-30 09:04 AM


Seymour... ...so there
Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-07-30 09:04 AM


Very nice answer to Serenity's challenge..
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2003-07-30 09:06 AM


Lady?

You always did have that delicate touch I admire so..thank you for responding to this in your delectable style.

(me? I try to beat people over the head with seventeen syllables...chuckle...)

Warm hugs to m'lady.



just lovely.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-07-30 09:25 AM


Exactomundo!

Love & Eternal Lights...

EA

El_Campeador
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6 posted 2003-07-30 09:34 AM


You did a good job with those three lines, Paula...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-07-31 09:35 AM


Paula, this is wonderful!
God, so true and I have such a tough time writing these . . .
you have done beautifully
xxoo

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just out of reach
8 posted 2003-07-31 09:37 AM


Awesome Paula !!  hugs, Chris



"The suspense is terrible.
I hope it will last!"
-Gene Wilder as Willy Wonka



    

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