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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2003-07-28 08:19 PM

Where One Is

When the last leaf
comes out of the table
and the kids have all
gone home,
when the house echoes
warm in the twilight
and the scents
of the morning’s baking
fade with the coming dew,
I’ll turn to you then,
smile just as now,
and you will smile
your love of me,
whether you are there
or I am there;
where one is,
we are.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-07-28 08:21 PM

Yes....oh, how I know this warm feeling! Bravo dear Ratleader. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-07-28 08:23 PM

"where one is,
we are."

What a beautiful thought!
Just an all round feel good write...
and so much enjoyed.
Thank you for this tonight.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

3 posted 2003-07-28 08:35 PM

Wonderful thought. great concept, heartwarming.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-07-28 08:41 PM

beautiful write ed

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2003-07-28 09:44 PM

Ed...this is a very touching and tender heart-write, and she a lucky woman.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-07-28 09:56 PM

I like the rhythm of this.

Thank you for sharing it.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-07-29 04:22 AM

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2003-07-29 05:17 AM

Beautiful!!!!!

Thanks~ARH

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

9 posted 2003-07-29 06:22 AM

where one is,
we are.

Just beautiful...simply beautiful. And this is the way it should be.

Patricia

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-07-29 10:18 AM

What an incredibly beautiful, hauntingly tender statement of love. *S* So many couples find themselves at odds whenever the nest empties... you've shown a couple complete in each other... and the picture is lovely beyond words. *S*

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

11 posted 2003-07-29 10:28 AM

Ed, this is KING!

I'm not sure what that means. but its good.

just, perfect m friend.

to my library.

xx
gem
xx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2003-07-29 09:24 PM

enjoyed

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

13 posted 2003-07-29 11:18 PM

Very sweet!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2003-07-30 09:51 AM

where one is,
we are.

~*~

Smiling....

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2003-07-31 09:36 AM

God, Ed - I do feel this all the time too
It is beautiful
xxoo

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