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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-28 08:03 PM



I Am….No Rose

you are a bigger fool
than I anticipated
when will you understand
that I am kisses of the earth
just ordinary but beauty
runs deep under sight
a little rain has brought me up
standing tall and regal
yet, time finds me
standing alone
what is this fear you face
from petals that are simple
these are fragrances from the sun
continually you pass me by
searching the rose and lily
for once stop, look
really look
tenderly hold this face
I am no rose it is true
yet, sturdily stalked
and looking ahead
when others wither
and turn their backs on you
I will always follow the sun
and it is true I can see it
the center is a black collection
but once you come closer
you will see that
behind each dot in this ring
contains a tiny seed
a champion of new life
waiting to explode tomorrow



"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-28-2003 08:05 PM).]

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Gabriel Frost
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since 2002-08-15
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Between midnight thoughts
1 posted 2003-07-28 08:33 PM


Amazing.Truly amazing. Do I have my own Cristina Rosetti to read from? I'm lucky to be here tonight. Wonderful stuff. Btw. great pic!
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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2 posted 2003-07-28 08:40 PM


H you know I l*ve this. Roses are overly hyped there are more beautiful flowers
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-07-28 11:12 PM


WOW!!!!! I loved this. Such strength!!! Amazing stand for yourself. Amazing!!! I am just stunned. WOW! I know, I know. I already said that, but WOW!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-07-29 04:14 AM


beautiful
gemjop
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5 posted 2003-07-30 02:55 PM


Oh this is one of your best!!!!!!!!!

library!!!!!!!!!!

  

Back to the top!!!!!!!!

gemjop
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6 posted 2003-07-30 02:56 PM


aaargh, forgot to add!

  

i was too excited!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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7 posted 2003-07-31 09:58 AM


Beautiful Helen!
and yes many more flowers supercede the rose . . .
and are much stronger
xxoo

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