Open Poetry #27 |
New World |
cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Beginning Chaotic explosions cause widespread havoc. Tumultuous winds scatter churning , boiling waters to far flung points. Then calm. Green tendons struggle through rocky pores. Minute species crawl unsteadily from beneath giant boulders. A far distant luminous glow supplies light and warmth. Nature embraces the birth of the beginning of time. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, this is stunning..Reminds me of something..but I'm not sure. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The dawn of a new world...what a great theme you have portrayed here!! This is marvelous, and reminds me of the series of books I am reading now about the lives of the first people on earth. Excellent writing...~~S~~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From simple words, so much life. Thank you, Maggie! |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you kaoru.Sunnyone and Sunshine for your encouragement. Maggie |
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