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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-07-30 08:14 AM


Thinking

The symbol
Is an acid one
Turning gray
Before we’re done

And smile
A
Wistful
Face
A clown

I
Offer you
Bouquets
Of
Brown

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-07-30 08:20 AM


I accept them, gleefully,
I love the flowers, rosemary
and coneflowers will keep the blue.

Nothing wrong with that m'friend--
I will take the posies dried--
as long as they are gift from YOU.






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2 posted 2003-07-30 08:27 AM


See how you inspire such lovely things
(cool reply me twin) *S*
I love your symbols and all your shades of gray.
and your *winkies* too.  *L*

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-07-30 08:33 AM


serenity,
You truly make this clown smile.

JM,
Then shades of gray and winkies to you
And perhaps a fantasy or two.
WWRS

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4 posted 2003-07-30 08:57 AM


Morning Sy!!
I'm not quite awake but you sure are!
Always on the ball aren't you?
Loved your morning write...
or do you write them at night?
Tea's on...I'll pour...don't get up.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-07-30 09:00 AM


Nancy,
What a flower you are this morning.

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6 posted 2003-07-30 10:10 AM


Seymour - well this write sure has gotten me "thinking." Every morning we are blessed by your gifts of words. Thankyou for this.
Cinnamon toast with tea? hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-07-30 10:37 AM


Chris,
To me you are a dallodil.

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-07-30 10:37 AM


Gut morgen! --I believe that is "Good Morning" in German!--but it probably isn't!--If I can't spell in English, how could I possibly think I could spell in German! lol

Since you served up such a fine poetic dish this morning, please allow me to share some of the hot German potato salad that I made last night! At least that is 1/8 authentic! (one of my great grandmothers was German!)

Loveya lots!
EA

I'll go warm some up for you now!

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-07-30 10:41 AM


Earth Angel
Well I'll saddle up Randy and be right over. LOL

Sunnyone
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10 posted 2003-07-30 11:11 AM


Well, I'm across the pond, where it read just as great as in the morning land...(it's late afternoon here)...so 'Cheers', Sy, as my adopted countrymen would say!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-30-2003 11:11 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-07-30 01:06 PM


Sunnyone
Cheers and thank you back.

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