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Velociraptor1
Junior Member

since 2003-07-23

Posts 14
Australia

0 posted 2003-07-30 03:42 AM

MY FUTURE

Some days I stand at school,
and just wonder what its going to be
like when I’m older
would it be tremendous, graceful or
would it be unsatisfying .

I can’t really be too sure
but what really matters to me
is in my heart and my family.

Daniel

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-30 04:27 AM

Family is what holds us together..Well, not all of us but, as dysfunctional as mine may be..I don't think I could live without them.

Great poem, a little reminder of what's important.

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

2 posted 2003-07-30 08:08 AM

Whatever happens in lfe, family will always be important. Enjoyed the read.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-07-30 08:15 AM

Daniel, this is so lovely.

I applaud you for voicing your apprehension at what the future might bring, AND your solid stance on what the bedrock of your present IS.

you are a very wise young man, m'friend.

Hugs?

(aw..c'mon, just one.)

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2003-07-30 09:36 AM

Good job, Daniel. I'm glad you see the value of your family...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-07-30 09:40 AM

Young man, do you know how glad I am to see a new free verse poem by you? And your mother thought this would be a passing fancy...well, it's fancy, all right, and I'm looking forward to your next poem!

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2003-07-30 09:50 AM

Hey dude!
You're future's so bright your gonna need shades!

Glad to see ya here again. Nice poem. Nice family.

Ed

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-07-30 10:04 AM

So full of heart! Wonderful that you feel this way about your family!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

8 posted 2003-07-30 07:58 PM

would it be tremendous, graceful or
would it be unsatisfying .

you have written
what everybody wonders
Daniel
and that makes this
a good poem

keep it up!

Cassandra Ness
New Member

since 2003-07-19

Posts 7
Cape Cod, Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2003-07-30 10:42 PM

My friend's name is Daniel, and he always says nice things like this to me and his other friends. I like your poem..

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

10 posted 2003-07-30 10:57 PM

Daniel thisis good.You've wrote what so many choose to ignore.The importance of family wethere 100% together or dysfunctional is very important.
angelblueyes

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-07-31 02:22 AM

hey I'm 33 and still don't know how it's gonna be when I grow up

good write Daniel

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (07-31-2003 02:23 AM).]

Velociraptor1
Junior Member

since 2003-07-23

Posts 14
Australia

12 posted 2003-07-31 05:45 PM

thanks everyone

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2003-08-01 12:15 PM

Hey Son, this really is a great poem, I love your thoughts and yes what matters is your heart and your family. We're here for you sweetie.

and

Mum

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (08-01-2003 12:16 AM).]

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

14 posted 2003-08-01 12:22 PM

Some days I stand at school,
and just wonder what its going to be
like when I’m older
would it be tremendous, graceful or
would it be unsatisfying .
_____________
interesting stuff ... what do you think on this same 4 lines minus a few words.
___________

Some days I stand,
and wonder
(is)
older
graceful or
unsatisfying.
______________
just a thought...sorry if I overstepped my bounds here...

Mike

Great Poem though, relate.

Velociraptor1
Junior Member

since 2003-07-23

Posts 14
Australia

15 posted 2003-08-01 03:02 AM

Thanks everybody i like your replies
Bye

[This message has been edited by Velociraptor1 (08-01-2003 03:02 AM).]

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

16 posted 2003-08-01 05:36 PM

I must admit you have your head on straight for such a young age...

Enjoyed this and it's great to know where your heart is...family is the most important thing I do believe in this life..without them we'd be lost wouldn't we? *whispers* I'm with passingshadows I still don't know what I'm going to be when I grow up as well

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

17 posted 2004-05-03 08:51 AM

no matter what you choose in life, make sure not to grow up too fast!

give your mommy as many years as possible to cuddle you

i can see your talent Daniel, and I do hope to see more

Trent
Junior Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 12
Perth, Western Australia

18 posted 2004-05-08 05:04 AM

sometimes i am unsatisfied at school when people are mean to me.

nice poem Daniel!!!

Trent

velociraptor
Junior Member

since 2003-07-23

Posts 12

19 posted 2004-05-08 05:50 AM

Hi Trent, thanks so much for replying to my poem and I look forward to reading more poems by you.

Daniel

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