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Velociraptor1
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0 posted 2003-07-23 07:23 AM


DINOSAUR

Dinosaur

flesh eating

humongous killing machine

fast and furious hunter

predator


© Copyright 2003 Daniel Russo - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-07-23 07:58 AM


Welcome to Passions. You've said a lot in a few words here. I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our family of poets here. Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions.
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El_Campeador
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2 posted 2003-07-23 08:06 AM


Welcome to PiP!

I have always been a dinosaur lover, and look forward to reading more...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-07-23 08:24 AM


Welcome to Passions, Daniel!  If you have an ounce of poetry in your soul as your mother has...I expect to see more and more dinosaur poetry!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Martie
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4 posted 2003-07-23 10:28 AM


Welcome, Daniel!  Great form in this poem...and a very interesting subject.  I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-07-23 10:36 AM


Jurassic Park revisited! Loved it!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

wranx
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6 posted 2003-07-23 11:28 AM


Hi Raptor

This is a great little sketch....Of a very large topic...

Well done!

~wranx

icebox
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7 posted 2003-07-23 03:44 PM


Soounds like a blind date I had once.

*grin*

Welcome to PiP!

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2003-07-23 03:57 PM


Welcome!! Is your mom a poet here? Well you are certainly one as well. I look forward to reading a lot more from you!
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9 posted 2003-07-23 04:02 PM


LOL at icebox, warm welcome Daniel we all adore you mother's writing and I'm sure the talents flows through bloodlines
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10 posted 2003-07-23 04:51 PM


Ah Daniel you picked  my favorite predator.  Welcome to the family of poets here and I will be anxiously awaiting more of your poetry, as I sure enjoyed this one
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11 posted 2003-07-23 04:53 PM


Hi!  Welcome to PiP Daniel!
Loved your first post..
Hope to see more from you soon..
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2003-07-23 04:55 PM


Good Morning Daniel....I just want to say I love your poem, you have done a great job and I am so proud of you.

Welcome to Passions
You will love it here.

hugs

Mum

Nan
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13 posted 2003-07-23 08:01 PM


Welcome indeed, Daniel... A son of Maree is a friend of PiP - I'm looking forward to LOTS more of your great poems...

[This message has been edited by Nan (07-23-2003 08:06 PM).]

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14 posted 2003-07-23 08:06 PM



Welcome, Daniel!  Good to have you here!
I enjoyed your poem and hope to read lots more from you.
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

brian sites
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15 posted 2003-07-24 02:19 AM


velociraptors are the coolest aren't they?

they are so fast

not like those big slow
tree-nibblers

they have those big loooooooong necks

slowpokes

yep
you picked a good one......and this poem

is to the
point

just like a meateater!

good one Danny!

littlewing
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16 posted 2003-07-24 04:39 AM


Good job Daniel!
I love this and will read it to my son
he loves dinosaurs . . .
You have much of your mother
inside of you
Welcome to PIP!
xxoo

Velociraptor1
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17 posted 2003-07-24 04:48 AM


hi everybody, thanks for lovely replies and for the warm welcome. I am sure i will like it here.

garysgirl thank you for the special greeting.

Daniel.Russo

Jamie
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18 posted 2003-07-27 08:56 PM


Hi Daniel,

Thanks for letting us read your fine poem. Surely some of your Mum's talent must have found its way to you. Welcome to PIP


J

Ceinwyn
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19 posted 2003-07-27 11:56 PM


Welcome!! I have to send this to my step mum to read to my baby brother he'll love this...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Cassandra Ness
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20 posted 2003-07-30 10:39 PM


I love dinosaurs.  They're one of my favorite creatures... Especially T-Rex. He's the king of all dinosaurs...

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21 posted 2004-05-03 08:50 AM


Wow, fantastic poem Daniel!
great descriptions

Trent
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22 posted 2004-05-08 05:01 AM


If a dinosaur was chasing after me, i would run very fast..even if he is a unstopable killing machine!!!

Trent

velociraptor
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23 posted 2004-05-08 05:53 AM


Hi Trent, I would run very fast too.

Thank you for replying.

Daniel

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