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Open Poetry #27

With A Stroke Of A Key

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-07-30 02:43 AM

With A Stroke Of A Key

Tales of the marionette
Dancing to each tune
Across cyberspace
Gazing star and moon

With her painted mask
Dancing to seduction
He pulls her strings
She followed instruction

Threaded to his words
So flexible and pliable
At every keystroke
She was ever reliable

The dangerous liason
She foolishly dangled
Without a safety net
Heartrings entangled

Love does silly things
Yet grateful was she
Allured and enticed
With a stroke of a key

Hope©2003

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-07-30 03:03 AM

ooooo, this is so ME

dang! wow!

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2003-07-30 03:30 AM

Dix we must be cyber twins LOL

Hope

P.S I sent you email yesterday , did you recieve it ??

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2003-07-30 05:31 AM

Speaking as a former 'marionette', I have to agree with this poem in every line! But, let me add that it is always a thrill to meet the one who is clicking the keys!! Loved this one....excellent.....~~S~~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-07-30 05:41 AM

Thanks Sunnyone , the sad part for me is that it can never happen

Hope

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-07-30 01:30 PM

Hope~

'Threaded to his words'

THAT IS A GORGEOUSLY original thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2003-07-31 01:43 AM

Thank you Marge , yes his words mean so much
I did change the first line , I thought marionette sounded too artificial

Written are those tales
Dancing to each tune
Across cyberspace
Gazing star and moon
Hope

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