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ptwils165
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since 2002-11-29
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0 posted 2003-07-29 07:37 PM


...hard to remember when the words ran out,
a simple ‘I love you’ lost in the rain;
missing those smiles you casually gave,
reviving cold hearts to breathe once again.

...hard to ignore the way that you left,
when the page of a journal is angered and torn;
the spite ripped away with the paper that day
small consolation for tears shed at dawn.

...hard to recall if the fault was all mine,
harder to know where you’re hoarding the sun
while I count all these questions and theorise why
the words just ran out when the rain had begun.


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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
1 posted 2003-07-29 10:39 PM


enjoyed the read,welcome to Passions and continue with or without the drink


SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-07-29 11:09 PM


I once wrote something ---" Memories Began With the End."  This reminded me of that write. Sorry for your pain, and I hope you are on your road to healing, and if not I hope so soon.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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