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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Inspecting the aftermath crouched bare knees makes me need to claim foetal position as mine and only mine because I am alone in sight of what a mess destroyer left behind. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
I myself have found myself i that position at times, my tears my only company ... I feel this. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I know this position, too, and just hate it if I allow it to last for very long. So comfort yourself ... then please, move on. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
well i for one do not know this position, but i feel it when you write it  haven't read your mind for a while..taking a break  insanity is not a crime |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The pain in this is felt deeply...excellent writing. ~Heart hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi gemjop... I know exactly what you mean. The short lines really make the feelings hit home hard. But things get back on track, and it gets better. I remember reading a quote from "The Power Of One" by Bryce Courtenay... I think it goes something like "sadness has a season and it will soon pass". Bec "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Rise up from the flames woman!! It's got to get better before it gets worse. It just has to, if we choose to!!! hugs gemma, gemma~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I say you get medieval on his butt, destroyee becomes destroyer |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I ditto, Aenimal. *hugs*, Gem, I feel you.. Great write! [This message has been edited by Kaoru (07-29-2003 09:10 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok I am completely blown away by this because I pictured you huddled in a corner, dark out, afraid with a nightgown on with your knees showing hugging yourself Sorry, that is what I saw from this Damn Gem xxoo |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Get through the inflicted sorrow and move on as fast as you can, as mentioned earlier...depression is a greater evil |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Get through the inflicted sorrow and move on as fast as you can, as mentioned earlier...depression is a greater evil |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
'Tis only one direction along the winding road ... with sun to your face and the wind to your back learn to sail to wail reach for those stars ... they are yours to behold |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
yeah what raph said..you are so eloquent with your words and pain but nonetheless..instant karma's gonna get whoever hurt you...  knock them right on their *censor* lolIf at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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