Open Poetry #27 |
Humpty Dumpty |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Fragile eggshell souls have been known to crack wide open with minimal amounts of pressure, spilling unique contents. Humpty Dumpty is not a child's game without consequence. When handled carefully, some fragile ones have proven to be amazingly strong and resilient, able to stand upright on the edge of reality’s abundant table, offering us a new point of view, a new perspective on the delicate balancing act of Life that we all seem to go through at one time or another on our journey from sheltered first nest to the last sunset. But there are those among us who never fully mend, whose shells prove to be too vulnerable. I was almost one of these, until someone kind offered me the strongest glue of life... unconditional Love. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A difficult find, that particular glue. Not many know where to look, or care to look. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes, Ed, it's sad to say, but it seems to be a most elusive formula, yet the one we need the most |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A very profound lesson...beautifuly shared. Thank you, Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thank you, Eric, for reading and understanding |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And then there are some of us who are just naturally cracked!!!! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Looking through my toolbox ...... ....Elmer's, Wood Cement, Super Glue ... ... where did you fnd this? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at your reply Dunc, you crack me up! and Craig? keep looking, it's not in your standard tool box, but YOU seem to use it regularly. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I've always loved the Humpty Dumpty theme in a poem...and you've taken it to new heights. I love the last stanza, it gives hope and it beautifully ended. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Hmmmmm .... Either misplaced it or ran out! One more thing to add to my To Do list! (... now if I could only get this old pen unstuck from my hand!) |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
Very beautifully written! I love the twist on such an ancient fairytale.. .Echo. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, So much for all the King's horses and all the King's men... And my hat is off to that person for saving me a poet pal. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But there are those among us who never fully mend, whose shells prove to be too vulnerable. I was almost one of these, until someone kind offered me the strongest glue of life... unconditional Love. Oh, Kacy, I know this so well. I am so thankful that I have some people in my life (especially my Honey) who give me that unconditionsl love....in spite of myself. Thanks for this. This is a keeper for me. It certainly did speak to me. Me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Kacy, I've said this before, but i truly do love your mind, and your heart. unconditional is the cream of the crop! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Unconditional is the best kind.Just finding it is a little harder.Love your mind and your thoughts here. angelblueyes |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
gemma! I was surprised to see this one again. What a sweetie you are, yanno that? Angel, thank you so much for that reply! I love both of you friends, unconditionally! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus Kacy . . . this is beautiful Complete perfection xxoo |
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