Open Poetry #27 |
Discount Smiles |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Discount Smiles It was late at night and pouring down when decided I, to cross the town go shopping at the Walmart store to feel some warmth of light indoor. So off I went, parked in the lot with rain soaked list, now smeared ink blot ran into door to ward off chill and walked the aisles, my thoughts to fill. When there I saw the many more of single men (at least in store). And I of course, looked then my best my hair in curls from damp's ingest. Sometimes the child in me, possessed granted smiles to wink's suggest of those who stopped with greetings warm. And I, this night in better form Enjoyed the rising feel of blush and hurried not, was in no rush as I took in the faces new forgetting to pick up shampoo. Who cares said I, in check out line, more than I bought, were thoughts of mine. I won't discount those many smiles that adorn those faces in the aisles. Tonight when dark descends on me maybe I will again, you see go walking down the Walmart aisles and catch myself some discount miles To make me feel, if only when those smiles are real, to share again. M well...when all else fails "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-22-2003 10:35 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I LOVE IT! you never know what you might find at the store throw the list away, and browse |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*giggling* Oh yes...I love it...I smiled big time reading this poem...BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmm and I almost thought I was being followed... or met at every turn by one or two of those charming faces... who whudda thunk???? thanks and hugs M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When all else fails you go for the gusto and type it out like no other. Don't you love making eye contact...sometimes cheap thrills are all that's left. Now then, head on back and pick up your shampoo, you never know who might be looking for you. I hope you're having a good hair day. Hugs Maur~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You can never have much of a good hair day in all this humidity and rain...although I do see the sun peeking out and..in the next few days we are to have summer temps..high 80's to low 90's finally!!!! thanks and hugs M |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL! This is too cute, Maureen...I love it. Thanks for the smiles tonight. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, there are a lot of friendly shoppers at our local WalMarts, isn't there? I love that Super Center of ours.....you can find anything there. LOL I loved the smiles you brought to my face. Thank you. Hugs Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the smiles I get at the library, and Safeway and Ala Moana Mall... As the song says..."When you're smiling, the whole world smile's at you." James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, you gotta watch out for those undercover plain-clothes loss prevention people... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a "good-feeling" write Maureen...I will have to try this, but I hate WalMart...hmmm? maybe I could handle it for a half hour... [This message has been edited by passing shadows (07-24-2003 01:54 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I thought this one had slipped away Vicky, but I see you went hunting today *s thanks M Ethel, I am glad you enjoyed, James too. When I am feeling down I go to the mall or stores and I make friends very easily...so it makes time pass when I am feeling lonely. And Dixie, I happen to like Walmart...and I never gave it a thought that one of those nice faces may be a watchful worker...I just enjoyed the smiles and view. hugs M |
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