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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-07-28 08:10 AM



Weightless

Looking outward
From my inner being
I see I'm balanced
On a single string
Taking small steps
Making no sudden moves
I walk this line
Without my shoes

"No matter what obsticles life may bring, remember, You can fly" author unknown

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Miah
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since 2002-08-26
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1 posted 2003-07-28 10:33 AM


Great write Amature2.
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-07-28 10:51 AM


Wow...walking on a tight wire is what came to mind. Sounds like stress. Yikes. Be careful!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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