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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-27 06:17 PM

You are stranger to me
the one I know so well

Pitiful exhale
caught past lung, in heart

When will the breathe of this
fill your throat?

Choke from dislodged words
usher you to back row

Watch how my back breaks
show you pain beyond the act

As curtain falls, so do I
for nothing but the end.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-27 06:20 PM

bompbompbomp...

hello Gem Page,
I see you are getting along fine. sigh..try littlewing's challenge? it's fun, great poem

blahblahblahblah..

goodbye

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-07-27 06:32 PM

"You are stranger to me
the one I know so well."

--No matter how well we believe we know someone, there will always be surprises!--and not all of them are pleasant!

Loving hugs,
EA

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-07-27 07:42 PM

Gem:

I must echo Linda above, for once
and also this:

You are stranger to me
the one I know so well

sometimes I equate this with a person and sometimes myself
So much in this write in itself
xxoo

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-07-27 07:48 PM

Choke from dislodged words
usher you to back row

Awesome write gemjop!! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-07-27 09:42 PM

Remember the ABCs i sent you, and did i mention..welsh?

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-07-27 09:46 PM

Nuff said.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

7 posted 2003-07-28 04:59 AM

I am a stranger to you but look forward to more of your poems.Maggie

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-07-28 08:00 AM

Wow Gem...you words are always so powerful and moving. You tap this source from somewhere deep.
Eric

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2003-07-28 08:57 AM

Very powerful and sad, gem, but I relate..

You tell me to stop reading your mind,
well,
stop reading mine, first.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (07-28-2003 08:58 AM).]

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2003-07-28 09:06 AM

They do say that "life is but a stage "
perhaps when the tears fall , it is time for that inevitable curtain call

Hope

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

11 posted 2003-07-28 10:27 AM

Awesome write, Gem! I really love your style!

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

12 posted 2003-07-28 10:38 AM

Thankyou for the kind words.

but really, this stinks, and so does the feeling that goes with it. just a stupid vent.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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