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Merry-Gone-Round
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Merry-Gone-Round |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Merry-Gone-Round Why do I ride this merry-go-round whyWhyWHY? they ride I ride they hop off I ride the lights dim I ride round aRound while the music spools down I ride the operator goes home I ride and now I see now I know I see the brass ring up for grabs – YES!! Free Ride! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ahh, now I'm dizzy.. Love this, it's different, always dig that.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm up for it...let's go!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...Sometimes the destination is worth the journey, huh?  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the operator goes home I ride and now I see now I know I see the brass ring up for grabs – YES!! Free Ride! I could literally see the lights flashing and hear moan of the calliope... and your ending left me smiling. *S* Sometimes we go in circles not knowing where we're going... and find ourselves in exactly the right place... yes. *S* Your pen is producing perfect gems. *S* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sounds like you got on just at the right time Ed . . . I liked this - hey - are you in the same park I am - go to the beer tent and meet me for a drink LOL xxoo |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Different but I enjoyed this.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Always seeking news ways to express your self...and always surprising. Eric |
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