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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-07-28 06:57 AM



Wishing

Last night I thought
I heard my phone ring
I was falling
In a dream
I picked it up to answer it
Hoping to hear your voice
But all that was there
Was a dial tone

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-07-28 01:57 PM



I've had experiences
just like that...
ringing phones
falling
someone touching me...

wake up...

no sounds
still in bed
no one there...

eerie...

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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2 posted 2003-07-29 07:21 AM


Poignantly expressed.
Eric

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