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Borrow Of Time
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Borrow Of Time |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Borrow-Of-Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ This borrow-of-time that pretends to be mine leaves me crying for the essence of more Sure inking swell that knows me so well watches the clock-in-soft-chime Praying for keep of slow-hands-in-sweep turning in ink's gentle rhyme~ Knowing full-well the stories I tell will be legacy left on some library shelf Unread is the dread ... of these eyes-in-cry for words left unsaid ... before the goodbye In full realize that this poet's eyes may no longer shed light on the soft-spoken words of the night~ Dear Lord, I would pray for another day to pen the gift of my poetic say~ * Another segment in my 'Peel Of Reveal' series * ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...time is a gift, I wish for you and for me...time to breathe life into more poetry!!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge..I do pray you have so much more time to share..and time to spare.. your wonderful poetry with us! ~Heart Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: May God grant you many, many more years to gift us with your poetry and photographs! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
oh, you say it well, i feel this too, marge |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful, Marge. Your words have touched many people and may then continue to do so. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I can definately see why you would never want to lose what you have...not only does it bless you, but others as well, and isn't that what it's all about. Knowing you bring joy to another even if it's just one!!!!  Lovely as always... SharaRose @Q-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Margie... Ooh, this gave me goosebumps... I've never really thought of it like that before. But unfortunately however much time we're given, it's never going to be enough, so I guess we have to make do with what we have! Bec  "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This borrow-of-time that pretends to be mine leaves me crying for the essence of more Sure inking swell that knows me so well watches the clock-in-soft-chime Praying for keep of slow-hands-in-sweep turning in ink's gentle rhyme~ I liked that verse most of all, and your title is perfect! This one tugs hard, at the heart. Hugs, Marge~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
.....Keats said that about himself too....which was probably a correct thing on his part -- he likely had fewer regular readers at the time than you do now...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we'll be around forever  love this Marge |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Marge...James |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...Excellent writing!!! Expressed in the unique and beautiful way that only you can bring into the light. tThis poem is moving in the deepest levels of the heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge...  ...you know."My friends are my estate." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge, may we all have the time to keep writing, as that is the love of our poetic souls......wonderful reading you this morning! ~~S~~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Someday in the far distant future a young one will see your words and smile wishing they had known you in person.For your loving words will never die, they will go on into infinity. Bon-Bon  |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
Do so love your writes Sorry about the mix up in Lopsided Lyrics I emailed a moderator trying to fix it So new at all this lol I posted one here too Come see me won't you Susan~ Molly Susan Vessels |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
Do so love your writes Sorry about the mix up in Lopsided Lyrics I emailed a moderator trying to fix it So new at all this lol I posted one here too Come see me won't you Susan~ Molly Susan Vessels |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so beautiful. Betty |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Marge:There is never enough time int his life but know that you have blessed so many with your words and will continue to forevermore angelblueyes |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have a talent for beautifully expressing what many of your readers feel. You truly are a blessing, Dear One. ~ May the ink in your pen continue to flow forevermore... Linda |
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