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I AM II (challenge)
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I AM II (challenge) |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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"I AM" I am a confidant and friend I wonder what the answer to life really is I hear the laughter of my friends I see pain in the world I want peace and happiness for all I am a confidant and friend I pretend that everyday is a new start I feel alive and ready for each new day I touch the heart of all those I meet I worry that one sad soul will slip by I cry when others are in pain I am a confidant and a friend I understand that some just don't desire love I say it's their loss not mine I dream of a world holding hands I try to carry on my part I hope that all feel the same I am a confideant and friend ok...not so *gloomy* LOL Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I pretend that everyday is a new start" I loved that line! Great Job! Susan C. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
KristieSue, this was good. I touch the heart of all those I meet I worry that one sad soul will slip by I cry when others are in pain I am a confidant and a friend I feel you in these lines.If I could see my own as well as I can see and help others, oh my.You met the challenge well  angelblueyes |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thank you Susan and Angel~ I appreciate it greatly! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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