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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-07-27 02:00 AM


All the tears one does cry,
Wake up to a dull gray sky.
The dreams of yesterday gone today,
Lies we live churn to truth in what we say.
Beaten down and submit,
Life of nothingness I ammit.
Sorrow does fill thy heart so cold,
Same sad story that is always told.
Love's end is sorrows start,
Painful it is to depart.
And you can honestly say,
You've crippled me completely...

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

© Copyright 2003 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-07-27 06:19 PM


Kyle:

strangely enough
I do know this quite well

You've crippled me completely...

xxoo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-27 06:57 PM


You may feel crippled, but in time those legs will start walking your path.

Gawd, I do know how that feels, but believe me, the wind will come back into your sails again ~ and soon I hope! Emotional growing pains, hurt like Hell!

Healing hugs,
EA

jaysh
Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133
IL, USA
3 posted 2003-07-27 07:16 PM


I can relate to that quite well, good write!
Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
4 posted 2003-07-27 09:36 PM


well thanks...i have no idea what i was writing about though just how i felt at the time i guess

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

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