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Open Poetry #27

The Light of Thy Smile

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2003-07-26 10:28 AM

Thy beauty in no way can be measured
Nor upon any earthly tongue described
For thy image shall be as one treasured
Where burned forever thy image inscribed

Deeper than surface beauty thou possess
Far greater what wonders there may be found
Diving down among the truest of depths
Where the chorus of thy beauty resound

A certain something one cannot define
That which unspoken, brings to thee such grace
Perfected within someone of like mind
Where the many lines of thy beauty trace

The light of thy smile speaks volumes for thee
Of wherein lies the strength of thy beauty

IntoTheFlames
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since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

1 posted 2003-07-26 10:34 AM

Great write! You have done an amazing job.

~*Summer*~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-07-26 10:37 AM

I do believe that you may very well be looking at a reflection of yourself as well!

Lovely, lovely, lovely!

Warm hugs,
EA

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-07-26 10:45 AM

"Deeper than surface beauty thou possess
Far greater what wonders there may be found
Diving down among the truest of depths
Where the chorus of thy beauty resound"

it's in the eye of the beholder...and being able to look within, is a gift not many possess...this is one of your best

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-07-26 11:04 AM

It's so good to have you back...
we've missed your wonderful sonnets...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-07-26 11:23 AM

PoeticKnight~
This Sonnet rendering is beautiful~

'A certain something one cannot define
That which unspoken, brings to thee such grace'

I loved it ALL .. but this word-thought speaks to me most of all~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-07-26 03:02 PM

thanks for making me smile today

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