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Open Poetry #27

Pen me a Poem

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-07-25 07:09 PM

*~*

with your small gentle hands
and with thoughts you have
for me

pen me a poem of your loving
thoughts and memories that
we have encountered

tell me how much you care and
how you feel about me when I'm
not in sight

convey to me in this poem your
deepest feelings for me

yes i know and i feel your love
each and every moment of every
day

and surely you feel all my love
i give to you

so i ask pen me in a poem all
your feelings so as to leave a
legacy for all to know

*~*

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-07-25 07:12 PM

How could she resist such a lovely and heartfelt request?
Beautifully done, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

2 posted 2003-07-25 09:00 PM

Poems can be a beautiful means of expression, you have done a lovely job

~*Summer*~

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-07-26 03:56 PM

Very lovely write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-07-26 04:01 PM

Okay, darling! Here goes:

How do I love thee?
Let me count the ways.
I love thee...... Whoops! That's Elizabeth Barret-Browning!--and you are not my lover!---but, you are a darling! And I hope you get your love poem!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-07-26 04:02 PM

Wonderful write Glenn...
Very much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

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