»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #27
»
what fishermen hear
| Open Poetry #27 |
|
what fishermen hear |
|
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
|
witnessing the scars of skin in the play of back of hand drift a gaze and drooling chin and a breast in a half moon downing in black satin play waves reveal the flesh beneath underneath reflection bright as I backward capturing the tide to hold the pelvic thus thighs apart and toes that thrust frothing in delight of reef just beneath the waves of reach foam and fingers yearning so minerals and coraling as I pound the bottom'd feet into clouds of where I am in the float of dweller breed and ye hear the siren's sing calling ye, yeah calling ye-- calling me, "Yeah. Ye come home." [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (07-26-2003 03:55 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2003 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Why in God's name have I sat here for an hour looking at this, going back to it then clicking it on this instant to see a mermaid beneath the moon? Am I insane? xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-26-2003 07:18 AM).] |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... yanno i love you sue... fins and all.  |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehe . . . now I have fins . . . fins and wings . . . no wonder I am so confused I dont know if I should swim or fly . . . LOL thank you K  |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey? Fins are just wings underwater.  |
||
|
PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Being from our neck of the woods....i can't help but love to go fishing, and this poem. |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now? Now I want to return to the Pacific... |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity.....I love to fish...but it was never quite like this.  |
||
|
brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
ok........  this is salty sweet and rich dense milk and oh my god honey mmmm you |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen...how did I miss this? Very cool, lady...I love it. And?...smiling at this comment... "Fins are just wings underwater." I love the way you think! "My friends are my estate." |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! awesome piece |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
