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eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22
Posts 323
Canada

0 posted 2003-07-26 06:58 PM


Am I?

An excellent student, sure to succeed
Responsible, caring
Am I?

I am water
And I'll take your form
I am not my own

Street trash, red lights
Getto grunge, and criminal inclinations
Am I?

I am water
And I'll take your form
I am not my own

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Poe_Pot_Pie
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 107
Canada
1 posted 2003-07-26 07:09 PM


Wow, that was great!! I hope you watery person don't turn into me! two me's would be scary!!
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2003-07-26 10:31 PM


Eminor...fellow poet...
You are the creative, the alter ego and the sword of truth.
Enjoyed very much your answer to this challenge...quite well done. TD

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-07-26 11:15 PM


angel - and what a challenge met - this is astounding!

I am water
And I'll take your form
I am not my own

beautiful lines
but you are your own form indeed
xxoo

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-07-26 11:20 PM


You are you and a very special
and unique person....as we all are.  
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-26-2003 11:21 PM).]

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2003-07-27 02:23 AM



"I am water
And I'll take your form
I am not my own"

Now those are some VERY cool lines.
Nice job on this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
6 posted 2003-07-27 02:25 AM


well that was quite interesting

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2003-07-27 02:58 AM


funny how we take on what other people label us as...wearing different masks
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