Communing With The Moon-----with Serenity

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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2003-07-15 09:03 AM

She rises, full and glowing

the empress rules by diadem
far beyond mere quickening
I reflect her majesty
the wind attends and pluck the leaves
fingers taunting strings of harp.

haunting tunes of future past
Shadows flit from tree to bush

resonating shiver skin .
Silver then the blackening
as Shadows decorate her face
Dims her beauty but for brief
And still I sit and I am still
Feeling pull of silent sing
Calling to much more than tide

within I am the silencing
And she says to all who weep
Come taste the wine warm on my lips
Catch the drop that trembles there
Feel the softness of my hair
it tumbles loose
to grace your chest
Watch the pulse keep beat of time

immortal

my throat

beckoning

in tempt of lips

pierce to taste

the drop of blood
Begging you

the haunting of
To savor THIS...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-07-15 09:14 AM

I could equate this beauty you describe as to the ocean...the sea...a world of what you've described. Thank you for sharing.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-07-15 09:15 AM

She rises, full and glowing

the empress rules by diadem
far beyond mere quickening
I reflect her majesty
the wind attends and pluck the leaves
fingers taunting strings of harp.

haunting tunes of future past
Shadows flit from tree to bush

resonating shiver skin .
Silver then the blackening
as Shadows decorate her face
Dims her beauty but for brief
And still I sit and I am still
Feeling pull of silent sing
Calling to much more than tide

within I am the silencing
And she says to all who weep
Come taste the wine warm on my lips
Catch the drop that trembles there
Feel the softness of my hair
it tumbles loose
to grace your chest
Watch the pulse keep beat of time
==================================

oooooh this is delish girlies.....
what a very very cool write.. a moondance divine....
love the sensual surreal imagery..
excellent dueting...your styles compliment one another well.
So nice to see you back in the blue again poetess Paula.

great job ladies.

"I'm good at two things and this is the other one."

C. Jaks

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2003-07-15 05:49 PM

came back to read this beauty again....
lovely lovely ladies.

"I'm good at two things and this is the other one."

C. Jaks

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-07-16 03:38 AM

YES...this is beautiful...

"the empress rules by diadem
far beyond mere quickening
I reflect her majesty
the wind attends and pluck the leaves
fingers taunting strings of harp.

haunting tunes of future past
Shadows flit from tree to bush

resonating shiver skin .
Silver then the blackening
as Shadows decorate her face"

Love this...wonderful writing, you two.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2003-07-16 03:45 AM

*sighing*
Did I tell you how wonderful it is to see your face around here again?

Dear John,
IF YOU'RE TIRED OF PRETENDING..
THEN WHY DID YOU GO BACK INTO HIDING?

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

6 posted 2003-07-16 03:49 AM

Nothing to teach. I should learn from you. Awesome! I just started coming here...I thought I was good! Read some of my stuff...Kinda new to this passions stuff.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2003-07-22 07:16 AM

I just knew this would be good!

i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right,
just know i'd die to be with you tonight ~ sandford

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2003-07-22 07:19 AM

Hey lady, where you be?

Thank you for allowing me to play in yer yard again. Almost like old times, eh?

It was a joy to write with you again, and know that you have been missed.

Thanks again, my friend.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2003-07-22 07:47 AM

Pretty nice...James

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-07-22 08:19 AM

Great job ladies, That is quite a dance.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

11 posted 2003-07-22 11:57 AM

And still I sit and I am still
Feeling pull of silent sing
Calling to much more than tide

~*~

how deep can this go?
deeper than any know...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2003-07-22 12:10 PM

Paula and Seren...magical and powerful...with a sensual overlay..loved it!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2003-07-22 07:12 PM

"haunting tunes of future past
Shadows flit from tree to bush

resonating shiver skin."

the entire piece is full of great lines, but I really liked the imagery of the above lines

great duet!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2003-07-22 07:15 PM

Hauntingly beautiful!
Very much enjoyed...please du-et again.
~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

15 posted 2003-07-23 09:08 AM

Thanks to you all...but you know how it is with Serenity...toss her garbage and up comes roses

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

16 posted 2003-07-23 11:49 AM

Lady Luna is smiling and She will now be shining down upon your beautiful poetic heads even more brightly!

Simply superb!

Luvs'n hugs to you both!
EA

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

17 posted 2003-07-23 12:49 PM

Lovely, both of you

Now Paula!!! garbage indeed!!! (tsk-tsk)

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

18 posted 2003-07-23 05:50 PM

Awesome poem you two!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

19 posted 2003-07-23 09:09 PM

came back to yell at Paula a bit--now woman, you KNOW, and now I'm telling everybody, THIS was all Paula! I just took two poems and put 'em together and edited a bit.

shaking my head.

Paula Finn does not write garbage. sigh.

Hugs you, but you, too, give me way too much credit.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

20 posted 2003-07-27 01:50 AM

hey mom, didnt know ya still came here =P love ya (kyle)

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

21 posted 2003-07-27 01:55 AM

Where and when and HOW did I miss this?

Beautiful writing you two

love the drip of lip . . .
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

22 posted 2003-07-27 03:09 AM

I'm envious...in awe

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