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Longing(GR) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Hurt, pain, my chest is full, Want of you does not cease, My mind, my heart, push and pull, Breathe, exhale, release, Thoughts, moments, music, voice, Desire to be with you more, Tears feel my eyes, I have no choice, Loves long road ahead to travel, whats in store? Days are longer, nights never end, Toss, turn, cannot sleep, Missing you, my love, my friend, Your love I need, need to forever keep, My chest is heavy, my eyes cry, My heart hurts, I want to die, Wanting, needing, loving, why? Why can't you be here with me? why? Pure madness, crazy, tortore, My body is dead, you touch it, it is alive, My heart bleeds, till dry, my forfeiture, Inside I am dieing every minute of five, Two worlds, two lives, apart, Yet together in soul, spirit, Bounded by threads of the heart, True loves masterpiece of art, needing you desperately, my soul is torn apart, For I am a zombie, I ache within every inch of my body, My heart craves you like water, a cure,my remedy, Veins need your loves fixation, Addicted I have become, already Longing to be with my love, jubilation, Longing please bring my love to me... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-27-2003 06:53 AM).] |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Don't I know this one  I like the way you write  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your deep love and longing was so evident in each and every verse. I hope things work out for you. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
My love what perfect poetry...i too wish i was there with you...it will happen...as each new day passes i am newly assured...thank you for the words.... love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel this longing and my girlfriend is only a few miles away...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very rich, indeed, very powerful |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
Longing please bring my love to me... this could only be the call of a desperate heart. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you, every one of your replies was appreciated! Gold..Thank you my love....I know you feel the same too...the more love, the harder the pain of the distance...someday my love we'll be together... xxx love ~ARH |
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