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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-07-25 07:48 PM

“HER NAME IS ALEXIA”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Her name is Alexia, a beautiful Roma woman,
danced by the fire in moon lit night,
her heart belonged to Bela, a warlock prince,
she would dance for him until dawn’s light…

A gypsy woman of a king, and a warlock prince,
apart for one more forth night hence,
so she danced the dance of yearning fires,
her blood to boil, her passions intense…

He was distant gone, doing what warlocks do,
this prince of gypsies on white steed high,
he rode into camp with longing desires,
heart beat quicker, as he heard her sigh…

Alexia the gypsy woman, who had caught his eye,
was held close, as they became the same,
they were together in the meadow fragrant,
where they lay together, throughout in flame…
~~~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-07-25 08:00 PM

You're such a tease...beginning
a story...knowing that we're only
going to ask for more...please?

IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

2 posted 2003-07-25 08:57 PM

a poem in the form of a wonderful fantasy story! Great write!

~*Summer*~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-07-26 12:04 PM

Alexia the gypsy woman, who had caught his eye,
was held close, as they became the same,
they were together in the meadow fragrant,
where they lay together, throughout in flame..

Bill, this is beautiful. There is going
to be more, isn't there? Good!

Hugs

Ethel

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-07-26 12:07 PM

Lovely as always, Bill.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2003-07-26 08:45 AM

The meadow's breezes fanning the flames no doubt...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-07-26 08:48 AM

Love the storyline Bill...
May we see more like this please?
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2003-07-26 02:24 PM

Bill...This does sound like the beginning of a story or the beginning of a poetic series. Either way...it's wonderful. Great Work!!!! ***Ivy Rose

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-07-26 04:14 PM

Stirring! Captivating! A passionate write, dear Troubadour!

EA

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-07-26 05:16 PM

throughout in flame . . .
Bill, you are nearing the place of your birth
xxoo

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

10 posted 2003-07-26 06:54 PM

Bill;This is absolutley beautiful.You've captured my interest, please tell me there'll be more?
angelblueyes

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2003-07-27 05:16 AM

Dear Bill you paint this enchanted meadow ... a magical atmosphere ... you are so passionate about it that the fragrance spreads while reading your words ....
Love, Margherita

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

12 posted 2003-07-27 05:36 AM

Let the gypsies dance on, BC, and let the beautiful romance flow from your pen!! ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

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