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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Magenta Velvet ~*Marge Tindal*~ There is a velvet to the twilight sky that caresses the coming of night Cloaked in magenta's soft beauty awaiting the twinkle of stars-in-light~ Soft velvet stairs to the welkin gate hold sweet dreams-in-waiting wish Gentle the movement of moon-in-phase across the ebon in galactic swish~ There is a velvet to the morning that cuddles the meadow in dew Moisturized wishes now granted in the dawning of love-in-renew~ There is a velvet to the heartbeat of lovers in union of morn Poems are made in the gentle-of-night to be shared on the dawn newly-born~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perfect Marge...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Absolutely beautiful Marge. You bring to flower the blossom and the seed. TD |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Soft velvet stairs to the welkin gate hold sweet dreams-in-waiting wish Gentle the movement of moon-in-phase across the ebon in galactic swish~" Simply beautiful, Marge...love this. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There is a velvet to the morning that cuddles the meadow in dew Moisturized wishes now granted in the dawning of love-in-renew~ such beautiful words...and the twinklin' too  M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - wow, you are so very talented in designing these and in your writings... BC |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A gorgeous, tranquil write. I love it! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
There is a velvet to the morning that cuddles the meadow in dew Moisturized wishes now granted in the dawning of love-in-renew~ Marge, this is one of the most beautiful poems that I've ever seen. The sparkles are beautiful, too.  Hugs  Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very pretty with lovely words. A treat to read.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
oh Marge, this is just so beautiful, it almost brought tears to my eyes. I am always so amazed at how lovely your poetry is but this one is gonna be a new favourite for me.i really love this bit especially. There is a velvet to the morning that cuddles the meadow in dew Moisturized wishes now granted in the dawning of love-in-renew~ oh wow !!!!! love from june x |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have a way of uplifting the bland soul |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
There is a velvet to the heartbeat of lovers in union of morn Poems are made in the gentle-of-night to be shared on the dawn newly-born~ This is very beautiful, Marge...images and visuals...very soft and soothing to my soul. Patricia |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gosh, I thank you all SO MUCH~ As I sat quietly sipping my coffe outside yesterday morning ... the phrase 'there is a velvet to the morning' came tiptoeing out of the woods ... I scribbled it on a piece of paper and went about my day ... then when I made the time to pen it ... it just flowed so effortlessly that I knew it was meant to be shared~ I just love it when the woods gives up a word-thought that splashes in my inkwell. Thank you all for letting me know you like it~ It's a GREAT DAY to be a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There is a velvet to the heartbeat of lovers in union of morn And even in the missing When that union cannot be Cocooned in velvet heartstrings He resides inside of me There is magic in the morning Just knowing love's somewhere Tinged though it is with sadness That he's not here, but there. Sorry, Marge... my fingers got carried away... the beauty you created inspired them to tap keys... a reflection of how this tapped my heart. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem be of the dawning love Your poem be of stars in light Your poem be of meadow dew Your poem be of gentle night --your poem be of pure delight!  Linda |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
...this...is the softest of sighs  so beautiful Marge! |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
This is so wonderfully stated. I really enjoyed reading this Marge, even coming from a FSU football fan...LOL Go LSU Tigers. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You ALL delight me with your responses to this little piece of fluff~ SuthernGal .. LOVE it when anything I pen inspires 'tapping fingers'~  PoeticKnight~ LOL @ you ! ... GO FLORIDA STATE SEMINOLES ! *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty. Betty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bumping, cause I was asked to~ (begging she actually said) But ... but ... I can't bump them all ... I just looked ... there's a gazillion of them~   *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bumping, cause I was asked to~ (begging she actually said) But ... but ... I can't bump them all ... I just looked ... there's a gazillion of them~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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