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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-15 10:55 AM


               Running around in my head
               All the things I did and said
                I didn’t know what id done
               Till the time came and went

    I lay here tonight tossing and turning in my bed
           Thinking of the problems ive caused
    Instand of listening and doing what I was told  
                    Now im all alone again

               All the sorry’s I could say
      Won’t compare to want I did anyway
      So on I must go to the lands far away
             Tossing and turning here I lay

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-15-2003 10:58 AM).]

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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1 posted 2003-06-15 10:57 AM


I know this scenario all too well!  You've captured it.
RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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2 posted 2003-06-15 11:08 AM


hello everyone

well this poem is about how I kinda messed up a duet before and I kinda posted it before finishing changes.  



my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-15-2003 10:27 PM).]

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-02-02 03:40 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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