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BLUE LIGHTS
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BLUE LIGHTS |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
SLOWLY THROUGH THE DAY WALKING AS I CAN....IT'S NEVER BEEN THIS WAY STARTING ALL OVER AGAIN.. want to know if your ok.. frightened by the light of day it wasn't me who said it all.. always talking about who's next to fall the darkness surrounds us all thinking we've got a minute he'd be proud to see us in it i tried to win my own blood but couldn't seem to get it (not to replinish) it'll be mine hoping of avenging it hoping of relenting it shining through me.. I AM SO DEEPLY IN IT the blood of others will flow..all on your own all by yourself is not control taking time and taking a toll can't complain just like dole.. small your patience, not my soul impulse is beating out of control...distance hold on tight,don't let go blue lights,black stars,shining waters,cresent feldspars... i learns i cry i cherns i lives i turns we die unknown skies leafless trees cold air,hey hey,my my he's an imatation,he's a figment of your imagination nothing will change his mind,blank stares,waiting for nighttime today is my beaten repeatedly birthday we will ride again will you buy me socluded through blood minions..the lights or shed your own of sirens. will you remain with me. fist serenade moving in slow motion... i thought i saw myself today it's been no other way my mansuetude...be you fatigue drew in...today we're losing.... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write!!!! QjQ |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
well my next post will be my last,i've got band things to tend to,and i just wanted to see what people would think of some of the lyrics,and just as i thought,everyone is very standoffish, but that's ok though,i didn't expect anyone to get the meaning to the lines i wrote,even if you skimmed through them,you know,faking the read,no hard feelings,people here don't understand what they don't know,and fear it. so there for i'm done,the best have been shut down,and still emerged from the settling dust. so goodbye to all. and yes they are an enigma,obscure,that's the way i write,you have to take on your own meaning,just because you can't understand it when you first read it,that's the beauty of it,a puzzle. i love putting the pieces together everytime i write,and when i belt out hose lyrics,sometimes i shed a tear. but here i sense a feeling of,if i can't understand it,then theres no reason to even waste my time,so if i ever make it big,i'll always remember the one who really read what i wrote. thanks |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
only one response to this,unbelievable,that is how i know people aren't really reading my work,so goodbye,one more and i'm done |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You made me wonder .... and I looked for another post of yours. Here, I think this is a very powerful write and even though probably I can't grasp it fully it touches me, I believe there is a great measure of HOPE even though WE ARE ALL DEEPLY IN IT ... the challenges of every day, your words are thought provoking. Don't worry if only a few people reply ... many others read your work even if there is no reply. So I think you should continue to share. Love and Peace. Margherita  |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
THANK YOU BEAUTIFUL ONE |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 ARCTIC WIND |
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