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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2003-06-14 02:07 PM



The breath that I breathe
in the night...
that's what you are

The very life that courses
through my heart, the song
that repeats itself over
and over...forever and ever.
You are the stars above,
the Moon that glows,
the morning dew that
settles on my soul.
There, in the dreams
of the night, you waft
through sultry mists
like a ghost haunting me
with your cloud-soft voice.

Through me, in me...you are
a part of all that I am
and all that I ever hope to be.
I cannot sing enough words.
None are more beautiful than
the sight of you,
the feel of your lips.

The breath that I breathe
in the night of my dreams...
that's what you are

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (06-15-2003 02:17 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-14 02:12 PM


"that's what you are"

awesome...just shaking my head in awe

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-06-14 02:17 PM


---your words leave me breathless...

~ May you breathe love's breath forevermore...

Warm hugs,
Linda

gyiel marlok
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since 2003-06-08
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3 posted 2003-06-14 03:10 PM


SULTRY MISTS LIKE A GHOST,SWEET
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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4 posted 2003-06-14 03:12 PM


very nicely written,,,

QjQ

Magnus
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5 posted 2003-06-14 03:12 PM


Ok,  does IWIHWT mean anything?


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-06-15 05:37 AM


Silky...one of my favorites...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
7 posted 2003-06-15 09:54 AM


Ivy Rose, this is just after my heart .... so very beautiful! You lucky lady!
Love, Margherita

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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8 posted 2003-06-15 11:06 AM


The breath that I breathe
in the night of my dreams...
that's what you are

breathtaking!

Kahlil
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Posts 1881

9 posted 2003-06-15 11:06 AM


into the library
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2008-02-02 03:35 PM


Very Much enjoyed your words!

ARCTIC WIND

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