Open Poetry #27 |
The Breath I Breathe |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
The breath that I breathe in the night... that's what you are The very life that courses through my heart, the song that repeats itself over and over...forever and ever. You are the stars above, the Moon that glows, the morning dew that settles on my soul. There, in the dreams of the night, you waft through sultry mists like a ghost haunting me with your cloud-soft voice. Through me, in me...you are a part of all that I am and all that I ever hope to be. I cannot sing enough words. None are more beautiful than the sight of you, the feel of your lips. The breath that I breathe in the night of my dreams... that's what you are [This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (06-15-2003 02:17 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"that's what you are" awesome...just shaking my head in awe |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
---your words leave me breathless... ~ May you breathe love's breath forevermore... Warm hugs, Linda |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
SULTRY MISTS LIKE A GHOST,SWEET |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written,,, QjQ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ok, does IWIHWT mean anything? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...one of my favorites...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ivy Rose, this is just after my heart .... so very beautiful! You lucky lady! Love, Margherita |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
The breath that I breathe in the night of my dreams... that's what you are breathtaking! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
into the library |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much enjoyed your words! ARCTIC WIND |
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