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Margherita
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0 posted 2003-06-15 10:13 AM





Full moon swing

Spellbound by
the full Moon,
a silent sigh
of primordial longing
surges from my depth.

Moonbeams flash,
lifting me softly
off the ground,
lovingly wrapped
in silvery strings.

All the while the moon
smiles so enchantingly.
I close my eyes
and surrender to her
irresistible charm.

I shiver with pleasure
when I feel you near
swinging with me
around the moon
pushed by the Angels.

Release all fear my Love
you say, kissing me
through the dark side
holding me tight,
your arms my harbor.

Moonstruck we swing
through our dream
no need to land,
we know, our fascination
will never ever end.



© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
RedStoneEB
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1 posted 2003-06-15 10:19 AM


beautiful poem i like it alot
____________________________________
Release all fear my Love
you say, kissing me
through the dark side
holding me tight,
your arms my harbor
________________________________

this bit i liked most

i also like the picture too

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Patricia
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2 posted 2003-06-15 10:29 AM


Oh yes, a lovely picture...oh, but your words, my dear, your words impress a greater "lovely" in my mind.

Beautiful words.

Patricia  

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-06-15 11:44 AM


You paint the loveliest pictures Margherita
Abbraci

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-06-15 11:53 AM


I love the way you painted this picture. It is so beautiful. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-06-15 02:54 PM


I could use a little moon time...James
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-06-15 06:30 PM


swing me on the crescent moon
summer knights make me swoon

Enchantress
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7 posted 2003-06-15 07:24 PM


Beautiful...simply beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-06-15 07:27 PM


Margherita - the moon does wonderous things...

BC

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-06-16 04:44 AM


Moonstruck we swing
through our dream
no need to land,
we know, our fascination
will never ever end.


Simply beautiful, Lady  
Hugs  
Ethel


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10 posted 2003-06-16 11:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is just precious, sweet friend, your heart glows joyfully in this lustrous write, yay, God Bless You and may the moon always swing like a pendulum and lullabye you in love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-06-17 02:09 AM


*sigh* beautiful!
Margherita
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12 posted 2003-06-17 08:37 AM


Thank you all for swinging with me around the moon  ....  such charm, no one is immune!
Much love, Margherita

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2003-06-17 12:11 PM


You had me from the title on...
this is SOOOOO lovely poetess Margherita,
we poets have had a love affair with the moon since rhyme and verse began.
Well done

Im still imagining your voice ...
can see the sparkle in your eyes.
I cant explain your power over me
Its understated understood & beautiful.
cj

Sunshine
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14 posted 2003-06-17 12:13 PM



Having a full moon overhead
doesn't hurt, either...

Margherita, a soft and supple lullabye...

nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2003-06-17 01:05 PM


Moonstruck we swing
through our dream
no need to land,
we know, our fascination
will never ever end.


and so shall I dream... very lovely, M

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2003-06-17 01:13 PM


Your full moon was in full swing! L-o-v-e-r-l-y!

Huggums,
Linda

Ceinwyn
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17 posted 2003-06-17 05:12 PM


im definately moonstruck beautiful...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Laqe
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18 posted 2003-06-17 05:18 PM


Ah, love. I really liked this poem, along with its picture. Absolutely beautiful, my dear.. Made me miss my boyfriend, and I just saw him two hours ago! Thank you for your words.

.Echo.

Margherita
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19 posted 2003-06-18 10:56 AM


Yes, a love affair! That's it ... and its never-ending!

Thank you all moondancers!

Love, Margherita

littlewing
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20 posted 2003-06-18 12:35 PM


Margherita - ahhhh very nice
If it werent for the Angels
(go look in the mirror)
I just dont know where I would be
this is beautiful
but they all are
xxoo

QjQ
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21 posted 2003-06-18 05:30 PM


Release all fear my Love
you say, kissing me
through the dark side
holding me tight,
your arms my harbor.

these lines are beautiful and touching,,,
your words and pic are terrific...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


vandana
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22 posted 2003-06-18 07:09 PM


nice write
Artic Wind
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23 posted 2008-02-22 08:54 PM



Spellbound by
the full Moon,
a silent sigh
of primordial longing
surges from my depth....''

WOW! Margherita this is just so beautifully written, So magical and lovely-- I love everything to do with the moon!

ARCTIC WIND

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