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I Am, She echoed (Serenity's challenge)
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I Am, She echoed (Serenity's challenge) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I am… Human woman, Carved and curved in facets clean Spectral at the center, fullest carats gleam Strong to cut from glass, a sovereign uncut hope Bright to sparkle on despite the sutured interlope Mother grace, Smile lines define my face Fullest hips bear heavy chores Hands of healing, arms of shores Adams lover, Mesmerized in time disguised and tale ageless Her, undoubtedly a finger food to feed his epic page-less Pristine peaks hospitable yet shy in his reflection Curved to undulate the waves awash in his affection I am… The Quaking Aspen, shimmering by touch The Tigress and Euphrates, a sea to sail as much Rock and clover, rolling over in the glee of she I am, as sacred carnal flower in blossom, his beauty Copyright Kkh 7/25/03 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Doggone, but this sparkles so much in this is so very special... I think I'm going to proclaim it a  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is absolutely wonderful.Your imagery, your flow, your words.You have met this challenge well. angelblueyes |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You did this extremely well... Susan C. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am handing out the gold stars today so please come up and claim yours - you sure earned it. Absolutely beautiful imagery in this, and I loved the analogies within. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "The Quaking Aspen, shimmering by touch The Tigress and Euphrates, a sea to sail as much Rock and clover, rolling over in the glee of she I am, as sacred carnal flower in blossom, his beauty" Such beauty in your words, reflect who you are...lovely! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
WOW, TD! Beautifully done....yes! Ed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, this is what you are.... beautiful poetry!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just wonderful, Kathleen. I enjoyed the beauty of this and the beauty of you.  Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
YOU are a goddess! Excellent expose! Totally awesome and I love the unique way you have met this challenge!   EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Excellent Kathleen!! Challenge well met! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD...perfect in every way! Patricia |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You took this challenge and made it distinctly your own. This IS multi-faceted and you do indeed sparkle. Well done, TD. Enjoyed, VERY MUCH. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus Kathleen this is more than a challenge you took it and forged it and put it in display for all of us to see thank you It's beautiful xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nicely done! "Hands of healing, arms of shores" love this line...especially the arms of shores. hugsss M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Heartfelt thanks to all of you, as I had the opportunity to speak thoughts that seldom have the chance to be said. Special thanks to Serenity for the idea, and the challenge. It's important to take stock of ourselves, and in each other, and our special contributions and light every day...this was great fun. TD [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (07-25-2003 06:35 PM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice - You are indeed - Your own woman... I like it... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so different, and the same!!! and I love you for it! Many, many hugs Kathleen~ |
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