only of "well but so in not as then holds"

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Open Poetry #27

only of "well but so in not as then holds"

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-24 09:32 AM

well
I've dug deeper than deep
to rise up the new
feelings once lost
overcoming those blue

but
the whole that I've dug
goes to China and back
and here I am still
with the "none" that I lack

so
I'm filling it up
with the stars and the moon
and words pre-exposed
but winded too soon

in
wrong time and wrong place
and wrong song in my mind
and the fallout of loving
that encircled my find

not
near perfect am I
in this day-dreaming-still
with a heart that was ready
and bonded with will

as
secrets stay secrets
and teal becomes green
surrender disposes
the sometimes of mean

then
to sleep in the silent
awaken in peace
where the line's never crossed
and the golden's not fleece

holds
no future, my soul lest
the language of love
well...but...so...in...not...as...then
holds...words "only of"
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2003-07-24 10:21 AM

Maureen this is wonderful.
Hugs
Sandra

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-07-24 07:26 PM

I am glad you thought so Sandra.

I am in one of those "funks" when feelings don't want to rise.

M

I am always pleased to see you.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-07-25 10:41 PM

then
to sleep in the silent
awaken in peace
where the line's never crossed
and the golden's not fleece

One of your very best, by far!
Lots of hugs, and a whole lot of love, Maureen.

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