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Open Poetry #27

A Perfect Night With You

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

0 posted 2003-07-25 04:27 AM

Moonlit whispers
Shadows dancing slowly on the walls
Music playing
Chords of softness echo lover's calls
Candles glowing
Casting light upon your loving face
Precious moments
Locked up safe and warm in your embrace...

So here I'll stay
'Til break of day
And when day's through
I'll spend another perfect night with you...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-07-25 04:31 AM

Oh...this is absolutely gorgeous...
so soft and tender...it whispers.
Wonderfully penned, VOE.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

2 posted 2003-07-25 04:34 AM

Thank you Vicky, and it's nice to have good friends to share with...~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-25 04:39 AM

the perfect love poem! this should be on a greeting card

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

4 posted 2003-07-25 04:41 AM

Thank you passing shadows, and I'm not sure how to go about that, but I appreciate your suggestion...~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-07-25 05:16 AM

Sounds perfect...James

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

6 posted 2003-07-25 05:20 AM

Thank you James, and here's wishing us all perfection, eh? ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

7 posted 2003-07-30 08:22 PM

You sure know how to make a person swoon. Perfect!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2003-07-30 08:26 PM

Lovely work!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

9 posted 2003-07-30 08:38 PM

Ahhhhhhhhh ... this is sooooo romantic.

Enjoyed

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