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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
Untited acrossitc poems Caring about his friends and family. Outstanding in so many ways. Loving everyone with no questions asked. Entergentic Child of the Lord Honst Radaint Inspires others to do their best Talented Own unqiue style Prosperous Helpful Egger Respects people Extrodantly Youngster Everywhere Special |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting,, A voice of honesty |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
the way you write...is captivating as the reader has to follow the poem line by line...the title and subject matter left me feeling like I wanted to know more about who or what you were describing...good stuff though mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what is it supposed to spell out? |
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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
Hi, Thanks for all of your responses. It is suppose to spell out Cole Christopher. The poem is about Cole, who has spina bifida occulta. Cole is 4 years old and he has a sister named Syndey. The poem called Super Sydney is about Cole's sister. Agian thanks for reading the poem. Jenn P.S. I have other poems in this forum.  |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Hi Jenn, Wow pieces of work. They are so touching to the heart. You so great with your words. The poems made me cry. |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Hi Jenn, Wow pieces of work. They are so touching to the heart. You so great with your words. The poems made me cry. |
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