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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2003-07-24 07:23 PM



I fall into the little box
its so pretty that one
It has glitter,
it is pink,
it is dainty,
it is girlish
I stay there
and I hide
Then
I'm happy
I'm not shy,
I have peace,
security.
And while I'm there
I can sleep
nothing bothers me
I'm complete
When I'm there
I'm not me.

[This message has been edited by walker (07-24-2003 07:23 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-07-24 08:39 PM


I tuck myself away every now and then also...just so I don't have to be me for awhile.

Thank you for your nice comment under my poem.

M

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2003-07-24 08:54 PM


I have a special place in my heart I call home, keep up writing


Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2003-07-24 10:17 PM


"And while I'm there
I can sleep
nothing bothers me
I'm complete
When I'm there
I'm not me."

A sleeping box huh?  Does it leave ya feeling groggy in the morning??  Come with a pillow?  
Have I mentioned that it's very cool to be reading you again?!?!

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-07-24 10:30 PM


And while I'm there
I can sleep
nothing bothers me
I'm complete
When I'm there
I'm not me.


Walker, this is cute. I liked it.
Hugs  
Ethel


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-07-24 10:45 PM


I know this place..I go there also.
Well done!
Good reading you again.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
6 posted 2003-07-24 11:36 PM


This was good.I have my own place I go to escape the reality for a bit.Enjoyed this.
angelblueyes

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