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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-15 05:45 AM


One Good Reason
To Find Out If
Someone Loves You

Because...
I want to
hold someone.

But...
not someone
that doesn't want
to hold onto me.

JamesLee
June15
2003


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-15 06:03 AM


very good thoughts,,,,,  love is to give love and receive love,,,,

QjQ

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2 posted 2003-06-15 07:42 AM


....hold....hold onto....

Darn nice....you said a whole lot in this tiny poem, my friend. Sometimes the little ones give us the strongest messages.

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Margherita
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3 posted 2003-06-15 08:59 AM


Dear James, so much pain would be avoided if all could think like you do .... love cannot be forced upon anyone ... we can give without expecting anything, but how wonderful when the one we love, loves us too.
Thank you!
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2003-06-15 09:06 AM


Yes, but finding out if that someone loves you takes courage. Many times, people rather juz leave without knowing...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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5 posted 2003-06-15 09:13 AM


yep, that's a good one James.
Kahlil
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6 posted 2003-06-15 10:28 AM


right on
JilGirl
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7 posted 2003-06-16 08:36 AM


A large picture painted with few,
yet pointed words. The message loud and clear!

Good write!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Paula Finn
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missouri
8 posted 2003-06-16 09:19 AM


Yes and yes again!!!!!!!!
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9 posted 2008-02-06 05:10 PM


Enjoyed the thought

ARCTIC WIND

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