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Happy Birthday Moth Queen
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Happy Birthday Moth Queen |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
An invitation I would leave, folded ‘neath your sleeping door if but for chance silhouette against the breaking dawn should you wake, find it there… wonder if I too, am near my love the sky is starless as you sleep and I, beckoning a moment with your heart to rest just for the night, here where we dreamed such fleeting things as love where I earned every burn a moment with your heart my love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! This one sizzles, Duncan. Yes, Happy Birthday JM, queen of the blue skies. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Our girlie!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY (now I know why Jan types that so much, it's actually FUN---you should try it, Dunc!) Oh happy day, a fantastic poet pens a fantastic poem for a fantastic lady... I am now at peace.  Happy birthday Jan!  and? GREAT work Dunc! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
All together for JM!!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA Hey...it is fun! We are WAY too easily entertained, ya know...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Way cool write for our Janet Marie.... Thank you Duncan. Happy Birthday JM! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
OHOHOHOHOHHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!!! ok, so I gotta be different.. Great write, donut man... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
to rest just for the night, here where we dreamed such fleeting things as love So pretty, and how fitting for her delicate wings. The Birthday gal is sure to love it! Very nice sentiment Duncan~ Yay JM~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL.... well..I see you got around to finishing it... nicely done Dunc... The Mothy one...well.. OK.. happy birthday... LOL.. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 I'm actually terrified of moths, always have been, always will be, but our janet marie is the exception. always there with a kind response, and she doesnt flap about in a fashion that makes me run for the hills, though she might when she finds out i dont like moths....  happy birthday sweetheart!  lovely tribute dunc. love gem xxx |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"a moment with your heart my love" How romantic... Happy Birthday!! (A lot of birthdays in June!) Susan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Y'know, a Moth just has to love a porch puppy.... especially when they drag in the very best! She'll smile, Dunc...she'll smile! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
if but for chance silhouette against the breaking dawn ========================= how cool is that image... just beautiful. Well if it takes me having a b-day to get you to post...maybe I'll have more of them.. lol Bout time you finished this gem up...thank you for the moth anthem Dunc  you keep writing like this and we are gonna up your porch puppy status to pretty blue flame  hehYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYA  ----------- Thank you to all for all the lovely b-day wishes posted on this. Ya guys spoil the moth... gemma...no moth worries [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-16-2003 08:51 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nice gift for the Mothy One. (Psssst! I hear that she's old enough to drink in public now) HAPPY B-DAY JM!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a touching poem.... When I opened it, I expected a bit of greeting card verse that would go with the title...what I found was so much more that I'm embarrassed to admit that first expectation.... This is well worthy of the person for whom it was written, and I'm going right now to look for more of your work. You are on my list! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ARCTIC WIND |
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