Open Poetry #27 |
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Rodents - Battles worth the fight! |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA ![]() |
Was me and T-bone and The Kid in the bunkhouse, sittin' 'round After all the work they did the other hands hit town T-bone, he's the old Top Hand As a flier he is gifted I'm handy with a fryin' pan or if somethin' heavy's gettin lifted The Kid come down from way up north intent to learn a trade Said 'Pay me what you think I'm worth' and so the deal was made Now, T-bone, he's a rough ol' cob He put him through his paces He'd give The Kid some horse-**** job and The Kid would come up aces I said 'They grow 'em smart up there in Canada I guess' T-bone leaned back in his chair 'Yore easy to impress' 'Bout that time the bunkhouse phone starts ringin' off the hook T-bone answers, then he groans 'I'll come an' take a look' The bosses' wife was on the line an' she was in a panic It seems a moose, or porkypine was crashin' 'round the attic So T-bone gets his .44 I bring a flashlight too The Kid goes with us out the door to see what we will do When we arrived on the big front porch we musta looked a sight with guns an' ropes an high-beam torch we was ready for a fight She led us to the attic door the ladder to the ceiling The noises coming through the floor give me a creepy feeling T-bone climbed the ladder then with light and Smith & Wesson 'You best say yer prayers, my friend cuz yer gonna get a lesson' The hatch was only big enough for one shoulder and his head This wasn't gonna be so tough That critter's good as dead Now T-bone gives a little gasp an' we all kinda froze My flashlight tumbles from his grasp and smashes The Kids' nose Down comes T-bone, falling back He musta lost his grip Now we see he's bein' attacked by the chipmunk on his lip! At the bottom of the ladder I was there to break his fall then the booming pistol shattered the old fuse-box down the hall The flashlight cast a muted yellow light about the place As T-bone roared and raged and bellowed 'There's a rodent on my face!' Now I'm just layin' spraddled The Kids' nose is busted shore Then the critter, he skedaddled left T-bone bleedin' on the floor The bosses' wife sez 'There he goes he's by the water heater!' The Kid was gushin' from the nose (He musta been a bleeder) T-bones' lip was all tore up but he just let it bleed 'I gotchu now, you son of a pup' As he slowly took a bead Now, a chipmunk's smaller than a man There aint that much to hit Water heaters, on the other hand well... they aint built for s#!t That carpet soaked up water good It musta been bran' new The critter ran the only place it could right to the livin' room We could see by the light of the fireplace cause we got down in a crouch We could see his little chipmunk face right underneath the couch The Kid sez then, to our surprize (He's clever... for a foreigener) 'We only have to guard two sides if we push it in the corner!' We got it done, just like he said in the corner of the room I held a box over one end T-bone herded with a broom You won't believe what then took place You'll think I am a liar Ol' Chip, made a dash for the fireplace! an' caught his tail on fire! It didn't take long for him to see the error of his ways He makes a dash for the Christmas tree and set it all ablaze We all knew what we had to do even if we did get seared It burned my hair an' eyebrows too an' my mustache an' my beard We threw a rope around the tree and dragged it safe outside The chipmunk got it worse than me He was crispy country-fried T-bone pulled the curtains down cuz they was still asmokin' The three of us, we sat around just acoughin' and achokin' The coffee table had been torched The sofa was a mess We pulled it all out on the porch and sat down to assess The living room an' hallway too were a soggy, smokin' ruin Steada restin' a day or two I knew what we'd be doin' The missuz comes out, eyes all red The Kid an' me was nervous But T-bone doffs his hat an' sez 'Ma'am, happy to be of service' Next mornin', here is what we did with the dear, departed soul The three of us, we stood around a small chipmunk-shaped hole Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God." |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA |
This piece it not of the form that I normally write, but was reading some old things that I have cluttering the memory of my hard-drive and thought that some of you would get a chuckle... Enjoy ![]() Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God." [This message has been edited by NickTofteland (06-15-2003 09:15 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling)...lol... yep...a nice telling! I enjoyed this..thanks for the smile! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Grinnin' here as well. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
![]() Too funny |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
lol ARCTIC WIND |
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