If in Motion the Knuckle Bruises

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Open Poetry #27

If in Motion the Knuckle Bruises

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-24 11:38 AM

I sleep
on my side.
Motionless
fingertips collide.

Train of thought
this is too much and
I slowly
became a flower
creeping
up the vine.

But
sometimes,
I embraced the
bruises that
your knuckles left
behind.

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-24 11:40 AM

ouch..painfull that is

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-07-24 11:51 AM

oh, your words punch me in the guts every time, one by one. but in a good way.

this is painful to read.

hugs to you meghan.

xxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-24 12:16 PM

alot of us here know this..great write

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-24 02:16 PM

thank you for this one Kaoru, I know it well

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-07-24 02:40 PM

Yep...

Susan C.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-07-24 02:44 PM

Two thoughts...a different boyfriend...kung fu training...James

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