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HomieX Junior Member
since 2003-07-24
Posts 10 |
Hey im 17 and pretty new at this. Tell me what you think. Thanks. This is called Anyway. It's lyrics i wrote for a band i want to start some day. Anyway I don’t feel like trying, and I don’t feel like falling down This is life how I see it, day to day, never seeming to find a way The key to happiness never unlocks the right path So now, I am stuck in this, running away, falling away, from everything Anyway, I don’t feel like trying, and I don’t feel like falling down Maybe time will stop, give me a second chance, to hold you once more, oh I won’t forget the times we had, the times so good, times so wrong Loved and learned, how peaceful life could be, then to have it ripped away because of change Trying seems out of reach Anyway I don’t feel like trying, and I don’t feel like falling down Minds darkness holds me back from being who I want to be. Finding it too hard to fight, it has life planed to fail I long for a second chance, dim to come is that chance [This message has been edited by HomieX (07-24-2003 03:09 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed reading your first post. I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our family of poets. Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us at Passions Ethel....garysgirl Moderator/Passions In Poetry [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-24-2003 03:24 AM).] |
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HomieX Junior Member
since 2003-07-24
Posts 10 |
Thanks. Anyone else? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sorry, but I think we got pushed to the second page this morning. Mine's on here, too, so don't feel bad. It happens sometimes, then your poem isn't noticed. Just a gentle reminder, more people will notice if you mingle and read and reply to other poems. Have fun!  Here's a bump to the top....  |
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