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HomieX
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since 2003-07-24
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0 posted 2003-07-24 03:03 AM


Hey im 17 and pretty new at this. Tell me what you think. Thanks. This is called Anyway. It's lyrics i wrote for a band i want to start some day.


Anyway I don’t feel like trying, and I don’t feel like falling down

This is life how I see it, day to day, never seeming to find a way

The key to happiness never unlocks the right path

So now, I am stuck in this, running away, falling away, from everything

Anyway, I don’t feel like trying, and I don’t feel like falling down

Maybe time will stop, give me a second chance, to hold you once more, oh

I won’t forget the times we had, the times so good, times so wrong

Loved and learned, how peaceful life could be, then to have it ripped away because of change

Trying seems out of reach

Anyway I don’t feel like trying, and I don’t feel like falling down

Minds darkness holds me back from being who I want to be.

Finding it too hard to fight, it has life planed to fail

I long for a second chance, dim to come is that chance

[This message has been edited by HomieX (07-24-2003 03:09 AM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-07-24 03:20 AM


Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed reading your first post.
I look forward to reading more of your poetry
and your responses to our family of poets. Please
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[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-24-2003 03:24 AM).]

HomieX
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2 posted 2003-07-24 01:44 PM


Thanks. Anyone else?
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-07-24 02:53 PM


Sorry, but I think we got pushed to the second page this morning. Mine's on here, too, so don't feel bad. It happens sometimes, then your poem isn't noticed.

Just a gentle reminder, more people will notice if you mingle and read and reply to other poems. Have fun!  

Here's a bump to the top....



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